Once I’ve got more time I’d be more than happy to critique your work with legitimate values. I approach things from more of a concept artist POV, so I worry more about strength of composition and design, anatomy, perspective, etc.

haha what’s a porn critique
just go to an artist who could handle porn and just ask for a crit. Isn’t it like a regular crit, except, it’s for porn? Just get a group of people who saw enough porn to decide what’s generally “good” porn and “bad” porn, like in regular art, even though they all got their personal bias (but you’ll always run into those people everywhere)

the critique should probably depends on what you were trying to aim for, the taste, the style, how ‘hardcore’ you want something to be. So be specific on what you wanted!
and if you disagree with something that your crit person said, just ignore it lol

I suppose it boils down to what would you critique about porn. If it’s the art style, well it’s a very personal thing, in general. And it wouldn’t only be about catering particular tastes, there is also what your aim is, both stylistically, and in taste.

As I said before, you have a very particular and defined style. It’s well above the majority of the fandom’s capability of critique, since it’s easy to tell that most of the way you draw things is mainly because you intent on doing it that way, not due to your limitations in skill. So what we would critique would be what you want to do, not how you are doing it.

If you want critique in something in particular, you are going to have to be specific about it. Otherwise we don’t know exactly what to nitpick.

Man, do I freakin’ love to annoy you about this critique stuff.

Yeah. Way I see it, the line between preference/style and actual measurable all around skills is thin… But it’s no excuse not to try. Critique isn’t 100% a ‘preference’ thing, it just takes some time and practice with actually conversing about art to open proper lines of communications on where those lines are. Part of proper critique is also the artist responding and the two parties trying to figure out how to hit that ‘progression’ mark without stepping on any personality bits.

In any case, until someone build a community around porn critique, you can message me on FA anytime and I’ll gladly play the role of know-it-all ass.

some pictures i see on this website are too small so really i cant rate it. The art looks awsome though. keep it up